My writers’ group met by Zoom this morning. We were all present. We all had something recently written to share. It was a productive time that allowed me to experience the truth of the situation we are in (hibernation) and the ways we can actually continue to be productive despite setbacks.
I brought three chapters of a novel I am developing to read and listen to critique on. In general, I am reluctant to let others see my work, editing on my own until I feel there can be no further improvement. In the spirit of owning the responsibility I have to my group to provide a glimpse into my work, I decided to let go of the shyness and send off those three chapters to be read out loud by me this morning.
The reception and feedback was positive. I was able to see and agree with the need to introduce more dialogue and also to narrate less and “show” what’s going on. This expert advice hit home, I never took a proper course in writing so it is terrific to have another person’s take on my work.
This particular blog site is intended to focus on my writing. I will endeavor to write here once a week, devoting it to sharing any insights I have made into my own or other people’s work.
I would love to have your input on ways in which your writing has been improved by having a close circle of friends review and comment on it.
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